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2010年4月12日月曜日

BR 1-01: Elmo Says ACHOO!

I like reading comicbooks, but I don't like reading books.
However I did it!
I read "Elmo Says ACHOO!".
Elmo go to Oscar's home to give present.
It is a stinkweed plant.
It tickles Elmo's nose, so Elmo sneezes many times.
When Elmo sneezes, people around Elmo is in trouble...

I think this is easy and interesting.
[58 words]
Reference
Book:
Albee, S. (2000). Elmo Says ACHOO!. New York: Random House.

3 件のコメント:

  1. That's amazing!!
    I don't like reading books too.

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  2. Hi Koki,

    You said the book that you chose was easy and interesting to read. How or why did you chose it in the first place? Please let us know.

    I'd also like you to put at least two labels and a word count on every post. On this one, for example, you should use, "books, reviews" (without quotation marks, separated by a comma). Now that you have Startup Labels you can use, all you need to do is click on those words in the list at the foot of this post, when it's open for editing.

    Numbering your book reviews is a good idea, too. This one appears to be BR 1-01 (first semester, first of 12 or more BRs). However, you should be up to 1-03 or 1-04 already!

    Hmmm.... Then there are the missing essays, introducing yourself to a host family:

    + Essay 1-01a, due April 12, labeled "drafts, essays", to attract questions and suggestions from your classmates, and

    + Essay 1-01b, due April 17, labeled "essays, revisions", including extra information in response to those questions and suggestions from your classmates.

    Did you save your essays as draft blog posts, and then forget to publish them? Your classmates and peers won't be able to comment on your essays until you publish them.

    Cheers.

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