Hi! How are you? I’m fine.
Last year, I joined the jazz band club and playing the piano there. I have ever played some jazz songs in event. Jazz is so free, I think. We have to play impromptu in part of solo in jazz songs. It is difficult to me, but it is very interesting.
Our jazz band club has many kind of musical instrument player. For example, piano, drum, guitar, bass, trumpet, tromborn and sax etc... Everyone who belongs this jazz band club plays a musical instrument very well. I respect them.
In our spring vacation, we go to a hotspa in Oita. I have to decide a hotel where we lodge. I and some freshman went to Oita to decide hotel. I drove to Oita then. It was very hard. At the end, we could find nice hotel!
I retired this club, because I don't have money to continue active in the club. I have to pay school money myself, so I am going to do part time job harder. My part time job is delivery of pizza. I drive moped to deliver pizza. In sunny day, it is fun! In rainy day, it is very very hard...
In January, our university had final exam. I studied hard then. It was difficult than I expected, but I passed all subject! I could move up to the second-year class.
I got a driver’s license in December. I often drive my parent’s car. However I like motorbikes better than cars, because riding a motorbike is more interesting than driving a car. I want new motorbike!
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Hi Koki,
返信削除Why is the title of this post "essay"? It doesn't include the essay, Essay 1-1b, within which the mind map graphic you've posted here belongs. Essay 1-01b was due April 19, and Essay 1-01a was due a week before that.
Essay 1-01a needs two or more labels: "drafts, essays, ...," to help blog visitors find it easily. It also should be 250 or more words in length. Essay 1-01b needs three or more labels: "essays, graphics, revisions, ...," and should include more information than you first draft, plus the graphic in this post.
Have you forgotten to (re-)publish those essays after composing and revising them?
Cheers, PB