Now, however, in prep. for an essay focusing on your favorite place, you need to pick just one (1) of those places. It would be a very good idea to do another brainstorm and make another map about that one (1) place.
Though there is no need to reply to this comment, please do share what you learn from it with your classmates and peers.
Hi, Koki! It looks like you've made a fair start.
返信削除Now, however, in prep. for an essay focusing on your favorite place, you need to pick just one (1) of those places. It would be a very good idea to do another brainstorm and make another map about that one (1) place.
Though there is no need to reply to this comment, please do share what you learn from it with your classmates and peers.
Cheers, PB